Grinner wrote:
> to mend or not to mend, that is indeed the question. alas, shorts you have
> served me well, get thee hence housework, i shall stride naked and bare my
> buttocks on oxford street before i shall ever lifteth
It should be 'lift' - you need to use the infinitive with a modal
auxilary verb.
> my hand to ply needle
> and thread. onward! harken thine ear! yonder weekend cometh and beareth down
> with many fine drink
It should be 'drinks' or 'many a fine drink'.
, considereth
It should be 'consider' - a command must take the imperative mood.
> not the mundane horatio, for we shall have
> revelry, ball games of skill and tankards of chilled bitter ales aplenty.
This clause should be terminated with an exclamation mark, as the main
clause began with a command. 'Consider' should also have started a new
sentence.
Don Evans
VampX
